From the moment Alice took her first steps into this mystical world, a land of hearts, stars and pink puff clouds tumbled towards her like magical tsunami!
In front of her eyes, blue, pink and orange fireworks triumphantly lit up the land like the burning sun. Her eyes squinted as the beautiful colours turned into dust!
She stood rooted to the spot! Shocked of this beautiful world.Where was she? Could it be real? Could any were be so stunning?
The rainbow that lay before her shone multicoloured, as a tree of gold shimmered and glistened in the distance! Sparkles and glitters enveloped the land as if to make it safe!
Behind the marsh mellow men, skipping and prancing around, cute little unicorns were neighing and trotting. A scent of popcorn flittered and wafted along the pathway.

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  1. Amanda Harris

    Well done Chloe
    I really enjoyed all the colours and smells. can anywhere be that colourful? I wonder what is going to happen in this place… keep writing!
    Best wishes

    Feb 03, 2015 @ 6:38 pm

  2. Emma Mansfield

    What vivid descriptions, you really bring this magical land to life! I love the idea of wandering down a pathway that smells of popcorn! Who is Alice, how did she get to this place? What happens next? Well done and keep writing.

    Mar 10, 2015 @ 3:05 pm